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In The Heart

March 9th 2007 13:55
A young man alone
Striving for autonomy
The world too large to know,
Though stirrings now exist..........in the heart.

A maiden in his path
His journey to a halt
A softness in her eyes,
Says something's going on...........in the heart.

There is a happiness
A flirting of the souls
Young love can consume,
Seems like harmony..................in the heart.

Seems like harmony
Can never last forever
Time works its' mystery,
And now the young man feels a pain.....in the heart.

In the heart, was harmony
In the heart, now there's pain

In the heart love clings to memory,
Love clings desperately..............in the heart.

In the heart, love can slip away
In the heart, day by day
In the heart, time can chip away,
Love clings desperately..............in the heart.

One man alone
Running from autonomy
The world too large, too cold,
Seems like emptiness..............in the heart.

There is an emptiness
There is a time alone
Another love will never do,
And now the young man feels more pain...in the heart.

In the heart, was harmony
In the heart, now there's pain
In the heart love clings to memory,
Love clings desperately................in the heart.

The young man feels a final pain.......in the heart.



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Comment by Stanley

March 10th 2007 06:11
bravo! very nice and heartfelt. it was an honour to read this.

Comment by Deorre

March 10th 2007 13:33
Well thanks, Stanley. Something a bit different. This is something I penned after a therpaist frined/colleague shot himself in the heart following the demise of a relationship.

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