Sometimes When I Hear Voices
April 18th 2007 20:45
Sometimes when I hear voices
they say the strangest things.
No grumbling or unhappy noises
Just love, hope, and understanding...
No persecution, shame, or collusion
No empty words that sting
Sometimes when I hear voices
they say the strangest things.
Sometimes when I see faces
I wonder why they're sad
I look into their eyes for traces
of something they once had...
A little touch of wonder
It surely can't be bad
Sometimes when I see faces
I wonder why they're sad.
A little touch of wonder
can go a long, long way...
A little touch of wonder
in each and every day.
Sometimes when I hear voices
they say the stangest things.
deorre
they say the strangest things.
No grumbling or unhappy noises
Just love, hope, and understanding...
No persecution, shame, or collusion
No empty words that sting
Sometimes when I hear voices
they say the strangest things.
Sometimes when I see faces
I wonder why they're sad
I look into their eyes for traces
of something they once had...
A little touch of wonder
It surely can't be bad
Sometimes when I see faces
I wonder why they're sad.
A little touch of wonder
can go a long, long way...
A little touch of wonder
in each and every day.
Sometimes when I hear voices
they say the stangest things.
deorre
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Comment by Nickoftime's Sanity Corner
very well written...made me look inside myself and question a few things...you have a hidden talent my friend! Don't lose it!
Great blog!
Take care,
Nick
Comment by Deorre
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I may be a touch biased.
Comment by Lilla
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I'm glad I read the comments before commenting... as I was about to comment that I really liked the simplicity of this poem and thought the simplicity of the message would really be carried well in a song... I was going to ask if you'd tried to put it to music? *lol* I would have been preaching to the choir, now wouldn't I?
I would love to hear it in melodic form ...
Perhaps you could provide guitar chords and I could try it for myself?
Lilla ...
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L.A.M.P.
Comment by Deorre
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I look forward to putting it on tape. You play guitar?
Comment by Nickoftime's Sanity Corner
I play the piano and the violin..if we can get a drummer and a lead guitarist we'd strike it rich lol
Take care,
Nick
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Comment by Nickoftime's Sanity Corner
The Twisters Orblers!
rotflmfao...good name! Even beats Paranoid Bloned *snicker*
Nick
Comment by Nickoftime's Sanity Corner
Gotta be careful, the typo Nazi maybe readin these posts! rotflmfao...
Hey Deorre, got a cool idea for band outfits...all the guys will wear their hearts on their sleeves! How freakin awesome would THAT be??? *snort*
And the chicks, (we GOTTA have a chick or two in the band just for effect), will wear lots of leather and strut around with a cat o nine tails and hancuffs dangling from their hips...!
What say about that idea Sparky??
Give it some thought!
NickatNight <<<< (new band member name *HA!
Comment by Deorre
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This is getting good.
Comment by Nickoftime's Sanity Corner
We could even, as a grand finale, shoot the turkeys with our guitar/slash gun combos, and then toss them into an open pit of flames in the middle of the stage!
Talk about dinner and a show! LMFAO
The Twister Orblers are the shit!!
*bangs head repeatedly on keyboard and laughs demonically*
The Scorpions got nothin on us!
Rock on man, rock on!!!
NickatNight
Comment by Lilla
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Yes I play Guitar ... and sing ... a bit ... (and have done on stage) but the chicken suit and leathers may be pushing it a bit, especially at my age deary... *lol*
Lilla ...
Comment by Lilla
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I really like the Obrlematics... or Problematic Orblematics :
Nick, (If I may Deorre),
How about the Typo Snypo's?
Learning Piano is the 20th thing on my To Do in this lifetime list...
*chuckling* from your comments ...
Deorre,
/seriously/ I hope you manage to up-load it onto orble and we get to have a listen... I can appreciate the nauances of finger picking as I have composed a few songs myself over the years.
Comment by Nickoftime's Sanity Corner
ok ok ok The Orble Warblers...how's that grab ya?
lololol
Thinkin today maybe Nick needs to lay off the coffee and smokes for a while!
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